Is this a good death note? I had to do it for school?

6514, that's the number of days my feet have walked this companionless earth that all are forced to call home. In this world I feel no embrass from those who live around me. The hostile days followed by the cold dejected nights only serve to remind me that I, in fact, am truly alone. With nothing to live for, each days affliction seems only to accumulate. Every day memories that I long for distant themselves not from dreams, they are the same thing. The sweet kiss of death comes nearer with every though that I might be happier if this life was taken from me. There is nothing here for me, no reason for one more breath to be wasted in this place where happiness and love seem absent. I write this goodbye letter as if one will find it let alone read it. More than anything I guess it a way to say goodbye to myself. My only regret is that I will leave this world no better than I had found it. No cherished memories will I take with me on this journey to which the destination is uncertain. My only hope is that this tear stained body will lie in peace and happiness will somehow find me. If I am gone, pain and sadness must leave me. They have been a part of me my whole life and their presence has always welcomed me. Not one will carry but a thought of me. I have made no impression and leave no evidence that my life was meaningful. Soon my body shall be returned to the ground from which I was brought to life only to be trampled on by those who come after me. I pray that no other man shall suffer as I have. And now I must go, life has said its goodbyes and death is calling faster than anyone could ever bear. One more breath and I'm out of here. Goodbye